“I want him dead,” the man said, staring right at me. Whisky bottle bottoms for eyes, Movember had lasted till March for this guy, and the 70s to this century.
When he went to get another drink, I snuck out like a ghost.
I took the rusty fire escape in giant leaps. At the bottom of it, I saw two wheels and a seat. It must have been my lucky day. The bike was not locked, so I pedaled off, my legs pumping up and down in theft mode. Then, suddenly, I felt something.
Actually, I felt nothing. My pockets were empty. I turned around, pedaled back, left the bike where I found it, ran up the fire escape and snuck in like a ghost.
“I’m going to need a gun.”
Writing flash fiction is so much fun. This one was inspired by the photo prompt provided by:
https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com
The photo is from StockSnap, Pixabay.
“Whisky bottle bottoms for eyes, Movember had lasted till March for this guy, and the 70s to this century.” Oh, I just love the description. I know exactly what he looks like. Good stuff!
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Thanks! I quite liked it myself 🙂
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Toward the middle I became a little confused. The writing is excellent – I thought I’d lost your blog and stumbled somewhere else. You revealed another prism! Superb.
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Thanks. Had fun with this 🙂
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I loved the humor in this. He was going to go kill someone but forgot the gun! LOL! Cute story!
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Even murderers suffer from memory lapses 😉
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LOL! He sure did! It won’t be funny once he has killed but right now it is funny!
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Fun story, and I absolutely love the description of the guy in the first paragraph – so graphic!
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Thanks, Joy!
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Oh, what a tease you are! LOL
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Quirky tale
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I guess he really is going to kill the guy then if he went back for the gun. Good story!
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I don’t if he’ll succeed 😀
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I guess forgetting the gun is a pretty big deal. He isn’t well prepared lol.
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Oh dear. Killing Jones might prove a bit difficult without a weapon. 🙂
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I think it would pose some problems. Good thing he realized before it was too late.
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I love the description in the opening paragraph. 🙂 I’m not sure how good an assassin they’re going to be if they don’t even think to get a weapon! Great story.
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I expect he’ll bungle it up big time. Thanks for reading! 🙂
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